The scarlet poppy waiting to bloom, that doesn't know the freeze is coming.
The sudden modest hot-pink stars that hide among the green.
The rough stalky stems with the purple-blue layered flowers that almost make me believe in indigo.
The translucent golden honey-bee with its soft dark zebra-stripes and mean bright yellow wasp with its thin black lines.
Write concretely, specifically, sensory-ly. Use lots of prepositions. Forgo lesser punctuation such as commas, dashes, and semicolons. What you see and what you would say are two completely disparate things. Forget the verbs. Use fragments.
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